In the start of the year, my writing was very poor allowing me to get bad grades. After few months, I read books, and I began my sessions with my new tutor allowing my english to get better. Therefore I got better grades at the end of the year, for example, my Romeo & Juliet, and my Creative Response analysis.
I really need to work on my supporting my argument, for example, in the beginning of the year we did the ‘Myth Essay,’ what made me get a low grade was me not supporting my evidence, and in the end of the year we did the ‘Romeo & Juliet’ essay and if I supported my argument better I would’ve got a much better grade. My goal next year is to improve in supporting my arguments.