Comments for Tomoka Manji's Blog http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit Just another Your New Learning Hub site weblog Thu, 29 Nov 2012 15:50:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/?v=3.4.1 Comment on TED TALK by 15rambukpotaa http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2012/11/28/ted-talk/comment-page-1/#comment-30 15rambukpotaa Thu, 29 Nov 2012 15:50:23 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/?p=256#comment-30 I really liked how Lomborg not only adressed the problems, but also provided solutions to these problems in a form of lists. However, I also agree that leaving out or ignoring any remarks made from oppositions is a huge limitation, as this ted talk only gives one perspective on this topic. Although Lomborg may talk about all the positive effects of his perspective, he could be leaving out major flaws from his plans to make himself look good. I really liked how Lomborg not only adressed the problems, but also provided solutions to these problems in a form of lists. However, I also agree that leaving out or ignoring any remarks made from oppositions is a huge limitation, as this ted talk only gives one perspective on this topic. Although Lomborg may talk about all the positive effects of his perspective, he could be leaving out major flaws from his plans to make himself look good.

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]]> Comment on To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan by Boutique Diaper Bags – Many Details to Take Into Account When You Select Diaper Bags | Conceiving Baby - help http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2010/12/07/to-a-daughter-leaving-home-by-linda-pastan/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Boutique Diaper Bags – Many Details to Take Into Account When You Select Diaper Bags | Conceiving Baby - help Fri, 17 Dec 2010 08:11:16 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/?p=78#comment-27 [...] To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan | Tomoka’s Website [...] [...] To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan | Tomoka’s Website [...]

]]> Comment on To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan by 15mcateerw http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2010/12/07/to-a-daughter-leaving-home-by-linda-pastan/comment-page-1/#comment-26 15mcateerw Fri, 10 Dec 2010 05:38:58 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/?p=78#comment-26 i agree with wessel it is about how a parent will feel when we leave home and the sadness they feel but also the happiness they feel to know that were all grown up. i think this poem is good and i think that we will feel this way when this happens to us if it happens to us. i agree with wessel it is about how a parent will feel when we leave home and the sadness they feel but also the happiness they feel to know that were all grown up.
i think this poem is good and i think that we will feel this way when this happens to us if it happens to us.

]]> Comment on To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan by Walter http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2010/12/07/to-a-daughter-leaving-home-by-linda-pastan/comment-page-1/#comment-25 Walter Fri, 10 Dec 2010 05:31:06 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/?p=78#comment-25 This poem really touches me because both of my older sisters moved away. When I read about the bicycle scene I remember when I first rode a bike without training wheels. It doesn't talk about any other scenes in my opinion as it emphasizes how short childhood is. I think the one stanza is because it emphasizes the shortness of their life. It reminds me of the saying of "It feels like yesterday." I think you could've gone deeper with your analysis. This poem really touches me because both of my older sisters moved away. When I read about the bicycle scene I remember when I first rode a bike without training wheels. It doesn’t talk about any other scenes in my opinion as it emphasizes how short childhood is. I think the one stanza is because it emphasizes the shortness of their life. It reminds me of the saying of “It feels like yesterday.” I think you could’ve gone deeper with your analysis.

]]> Comment on To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan by 15withoosw http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2010/12/07/to-a-daughter-leaving-home-by-linda-pastan/comment-page-1/#comment-24 15withoosw Wed, 08 Dec 2010 10:47:09 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/?p=78#comment-24 I like this poem too because i can relate to it and it shows you how parents really feel about us growing up and becoming independent. The similes used in this poem make it very touching.I think that the part about teaching the child how to cycle is a metaphor for growing up. I also agree with the theme of the poem being a relationship between child and parent. The poem should indeed be read like talking to a child.This makes it more relatable. I like this poem too because i can relate to it and it shows you how parents really feel about us growing up and becoming independent. The similes used in this poem make it very touching.I think that the part about teaching the child how to cycle is a metaphor for growing up. I also agree with the theme of the poem being a relationship between child and parent. The poem should indeed be read like talking to a child.This makes it more relatable.

]]> Comment on Pig’s Heart Dissection by 15rambukpotaa http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/comment-page-1/#comment-23 15rambukpotaa Sat, 07 Nov 2009 02:10:36 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/#comment-23 i think your heart vid was good but it may need a little more detail. but otherwise its good i think your heart vid was good but it may need a little more detail. but otherwise its good

]]> Comment on Pig’s Heart Dissection by 15reynoldsh http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/comment-page-1/#comment-22 15reynoldsh Thu, 05 Nov 2009 00:06:46 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/#comment-22 Its very good and informitive but some parts are to quiet Its very good and informitive but some parts are to quiet

]]> Comment on Pig’s Heart Dissection by 15carrollj http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/comment-page-1/#comment-21 15carrollj Thu, 05 Nov 2009 00:05:35 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/#comment-21 good... <strong> BUT </strong> Sam and I couldn't hear you very well. good… BUT Sam and I couldn’t hear you very well.

]]> Comment on Pig’s Heart Dissection by 15hinges http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/comment-page-1/#comment-20 15hinges Thu, 05 Nov 2009 00:01:15 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/15manjit/2009/11/02/52/#comment-20 Well done Tomoka I liked it very much :) Well done Tomoka I liked it very much :)

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