Comments for SEIRA'S blog

Comment on TED Talk: Malcolm Gladwell Choice, happiness and spaghetti sauce by 15jonesn

15jonesn — Wed, 05 Dec 2012 03:28:40 +0000

Nice summary! I really liked how you mentioned Gladwell’s background then related it back to his work with spaghetti sauce. I find Gladwell’s views on happiness really interesting and the way he can relate spaghetti sauce to happiness. I agree with what you said at the end about people knowing what they want but I don’t agree with what you said about more expensive food products being higher quality. Overall great job, I enjoyed reading your blog post!

Comment on To a Daughter Leaving Home by Linda Pastan by 15reynoldsh

15reynoldsh — Tue, 07 Dec 2010 13:49:52 +0000

I think you were able to convey your ideas, and gave a good description about the different techniques the writer Linda Pastan used. But i think sometimes it wasn’t clear what you were saying, especially when you said “The “curved path of the park” also shows the challenges of life, how it is very challenging for the daughter to ride the path, but she was able to ride through.” I think this sentence wasn’t detailed enough and was difficult to understand. Overall I think you did a great job and was able to write successfully and conveyed your ideas.

Comment on Tobacco smoking/Cigarettes by 15nakamuram

15nakamuram — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 03:57:37 +0000

I totally agree with you. IT SHOULD BE BANNED!!!! Your post is really informative. I never knew what was in cigarettes i just thought it was nasty stuff.

Comment on My Creative Story-Journey to the Center of the Shop by 15iwashitas

15iwashitas — Wed, 18 Mar 2009 02:23:05 +0000

Hi Seira!

Like your story. It was interesting, funny, and adventurous. I liked how you made the bad sprits as the people, the cars, the homeless… it was really great!

Comment on Should YIS have field studies? by 15charalambousr

15charalambousr — Sun, 08 Feb 2009 08:53:30 +0000

great opinion! i agree with you

Comment on A book I read during the winter break by Colin Campbell

Colin Campbell — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 09:12:45 +0000

Seira,

A well written blog entry, sentences are accurate and the language flows well. You get the style right but as the boys above point out above there is a lot of information and more of your opnions and observations would have improved it. Thanks, Mr C

Comment on A book I read during the winter break by 15whitinga

15whitinga — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 01:27:23 +0000

Hello,
Your blog was informative about the subject but you need more opinions and split your writing into paragraphs. Besides that it was quite well done.

From Alec and Jae Hyun

Comment on Roald Dahl English project by 15chenm

15chenm — Wed, 19 Nov 2008 02:39:29 +0000

I agree. you got a lot of words there

Comment on Should YIS have field studies? by 15chenm

15chenm — Wed, 05 Nov 2008 02:13:25 +0000

I think mostly the same way as you did for the camp.

Comment on Should YIS have field studies? by 15rambukpotaa

15rambukpotaa — Wed, 05 Nov 2008 02:12:51 +0000

i like your opinion
thanks for sharing!