In tech we were told to comment on two peoples tutorials. I commented on Charles’s and Marshall’s tutorials. I learned many things about what makes a good tutorial and what makes it bad. Charles’s tutorial was about how to make a paper gun. It was very clear and gave great tips. It also showed how long or small the paper should be and how to shoot it correctly. Marshall’s tutorial was about how to solve a Rubiks cube faster. It was a great example of a good tutorial. In the tutorial the man showed many good tips and used words to indicate movements like Di (down inverted) this was very clear and useful. In this video it also showed how to lubricate (make it move faster) your Rubik’s cube, this would be very useful if needed.
When we were investigating I learnt many ways of how to make an amazing tutorial but there are ways which are needed in tutorials such as clear voice, good camera and keeping it simple but descriptive. I learnt that its good to keep a steady speed and to keep the audience interested you could add simple but funny jokes. Using these tips it will make a great tutorial.
My tutorial which was about how to add a video in a post in my opinion it was ok, but could be improved. I think I could of maybe had my voice in, which might keep the audience interested. Also maybe more attracting colors would also bring the audiences attention.