http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17choiy/2012/06/18/english-20112012-what-have-i-learned/ Middle School Life Fri, 17 May 2013 02:29:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/?v=3.4.1 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17choiy/2012/06/18/english-20112012-what-have-i-learned/comment-page-1/#comment-36 Keigo Tue, 19 Jun 2012 00:45:45 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17choiy/?p=402#comment-36 I think the style of starting the introduction is great. Our year was indeed fantastic, right? I think that the linking to the Sandra Cisneros' website was very effective for the audience and the readers of this blog post. It is because from your blog post, it seems that I want to take a look of the book. This blog post was also good in the point that you influenced the audience to read the book. Overall I think this blog post is very effective. It reflects what you have learnt in this school year. There is nothing to improve, but I guess I have to say something... So I just think you should make different paragraphs. Still your reflection was marvelous! I think the style of starting the introduction is great. Our year was indeed fantastic, right? I think that the linking to the Sandra Cisneros’ website was very effective for the audience and the readers of this blog post. It is because from your blog post, it seems that I want to take a look of the book. This blog post was also good in the point that you influenced the audience to read the book. Overall I think this blog post is very effective. It reflects what you have learnt in this school year. There is nothing to improve, but I guess I have to say something… So I just think you should make different paragraphs. Still your reflection was marvelous!

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