I have learned how to make paper origami ninja star. I was excited and happy that Ana put in that video because I never knew how to make origami or even paper ninja. By that tutorial, I would like to know a variety of origami to enjoy. I had learned during investigation of Ana’s blog that adding your own opinion about the video will help get attention from other bloggers to watch the video. I also thought that her blog theme made blogger easy to find a post that they want to investigate and see. Also, it’s simple and cute. A contrast between my tutorial and Ana’s tutorial might have is that my tutorial draws on paper while Ana’s tutorial is making origami by paper. Also, there were many offers and persuading lines while my tutorial have only website for my tutorial. And, because my tutorial’s director mumbles sometimes, it’s hard to hear. But, in Ana’s tutorial, the man had loud, clear voice which was easy to hear.
I can use the idea of putting in my opinion to persuade bloggers to watch the video or seeing my blog. Also, since my blog theme might be a bit too colorful, I might change to more simple theme so that bloggers can check my post easily. I think Ana has a really good blog.
I have learned how to make that paper gun. Actually, it was one of interesting art video I had ever viewed. By that video, I would like to sometime soon make that paper gun too. And I would like to show it to everyone when I make it. Although, it would be a challenge for me because it’s my first experience. I could use the techniques of linking the main point of your tutorial just like my friend; Hye-won did. Also, the theme was really simple and doesn’t hurt your eyes (I mean that if it’s too colorful, it’s going to make my eyes dizzy.). And I love the snow-flakes that falls in blog.
Now, I would like to share about contrast between my and Hye-won’s tutorial. Hye-won’s tutorial director has clear voice and it is good… but, sometimes he would a bit mumble. My director might have mushy moth, but I think she only mumbles in the end of video. Also, my tutorial doesn’t tell the part I need to be careful about for drawing while my friend’s tutorial includes weaknesses and strength of this paper gun.
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This is a good start Katie, but you are missing several parts of the assignment. Please have a look at the assignment sheet, or the example blogs I posted here to see what’s missing from your post. It’s important to follow all of the directions to make sure that your work is complete.