Criteria D: First of all, obviously, I’ve used the appropriate materials and equipment for this experiment. Or else, I would have failed – big time. Plus, I’ve written every detail of the methods and procedures to get higher grades than I did last time.
Criteria E: I’ve written my conclusion very detailed. Of course I’ve checked my results and my notes to finish my conclusion. Also, I think I should have done it more specifically.
Criteria D: I am not really sure what I have to improve on… I think I did it fine.
Criteria E: I should have written my conclusion more detailed. Plus, I shouldn’t have included Plastic Container and Basin in my pie graph. Perhaps if I had not put in my graph, I would have gotten a better grade.