In Criteria D, Science Inquiry, I think I was successful at making the procedure detailed and clearly; I made 19 steps for extracting sand from salt. But in the other hand, I need to improve on evaluating the procedure into the conclusion. I didn’t write sentences that related to the procedure. In Criteria E, Processing Data, the most successful thing was evaluating comparing/contrasting the results with other group into the conclusion. In the other hand, I need to improve on making the results detailed in the chart. I needed to put the weight of evaporating basin, and the weighing boat.