Comments for Aiki's Blog http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa Watsup world!!! Welcome to my Aiki's awesome Blog!!! Tue, 01 Jan 2013 17:52:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/?v=3.4.1 Comment on Plan Reflection by payday loans online http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2011/01/11/plan-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-41 payday loans online Tue, 01 Jan 2013 17:52:49 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=69#comment-41 Asking questions are really nice thing if you are not understanding something completely, except this piece of writing gives pleasant understanding yet. My webpage :: <a href="http://paydayloansonlineapp.org/" rel="nofollow">payday loans online</a> Asking questions are really nice thing if you are not understanding something
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]]> Comment on My Poem-Radio by aki http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2012/11/13/my-poem-radio/comment-page-1/#comment-39 aki Thu, 22 Nov 2012 01:41:45 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=367#comment-39 I find that this poem is a large metaphor, talking about a van that is already ransacked and looted, with the van being a human and the words describing how this person is already broken, mentally and spiritually. The radio and telephone symbolize the heart and soul of a person, things that can be taken and destroyed. Although this person is already finished, the enemy persists and refuses to withdraw their attack on the mind. I think that this interpretation better describes the meaning of the word "radio". I find that this poem is a large metaphor, talking about a van that is already ransacked and looted, with the van being a human and the words describing how this person is already broken, mentally and spiritually. The radio and telephone symbolize the heart and soul of a person, things that can be taken and destroyed.
Although this person is already finished, the enemy persists and refuses to withdraw their attack on the mind. I think that this interpretation better describes the meaning of the word “radio”.

]]> Comment on Cross Country Heart Rate Assignmen by Mrs. Clark http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2012/11/14/cross-country-heart-rate-assignmen/comment-page-1/#comment-38 Mrs. Clark Sun, 18 Nov 2012 02:36:12 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=377#comment-38 Good answers. Zoe is fitter because her heart can recover more quickly after exercise. Good answers. Zoe is fitter because her heart can recover more quickly after exercise.

]]> Comment on My Poem-Radio by 17sashidaa http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2012/11/13/my-poem-radio/comment-page-1/#comment-37 17sashidaa Tue, 13 Nov 2012 12:44:46 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=367#comment-37 I think this poem is a interesting because I never read this type of poem before that is written with short lines and uses colloquial language which makes it more reality. I think you clearly written/understood what this poem is about, but I think you repeated the same sentence often "This poem shows the importance of the radio." I agree with you that this poem is a conversation with two people. When I first read this poem it did not make sense but when I read it again it sounded like a man who has broken radio talking to a mechanic. Personally, I would not read this poem because it is too simple and it is about radio. The title "Radio" did not catch my attention by the title I already guessed it will be poem that I would not choose to read. I think this poem is a interesting because I never read this type of poem before that is written with short lines and uses colloquial language which makes it more reality. I think you clearly written/understood what this poem is about, but I think you repeated the same sentence often “This poem shows the importance of the radio.” I agree with you that this poem is a conversation with two people. When I first read this poem it did not make sense but when I read it again it sounded like a man who has broken radio talking to a mechanic.
Personally, I would not read this poem because it is too simple and it is about radio. The title “Radio” did not catch my attention by the title I already guessed it will be poem that I would not choose to read.

]]> Comment on My Poem-Radio by MARII http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2012/11/13/my-poem-radio/comment-page-1/#comment-36 MARII Tue, 13 Nov 2012 01:31:10 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=367#comment-36 I really think that you have clearly understood what the poem was about and what the poem was trying to tell you. I also think that you have understood what the writer must have been thinking about when he was writing this poem. I did not really think that the poem was like a message or chat but the fact that you have thought of the poem differently is interesting. In conclusion, I think that you have explained really well about what you have thought of the poem, "Radio" and explained how the poem was made i n deep detail. I really think that you have clearly understood what the poem was about and what the poem was trying to tell you. I also think that you have understood what the writer must have been thinking about when he was writing this poem. I did not really think that the poem was like a message or chat but the fact that you have thought of the poem differently is interesting.

In conclusion, I think that you have explained really well about what you have thought of the poem, “Radio” and explained how the poem was made i n deep detail.

]]> Comment on My Poem-Radio by Neil http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/2012/11/13/my-poem-radio/comment-page-1/#comment-35 Neil Tue, 13 Nov 2012 00:55:51 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17nakamuraa/?p=367#comment-35 I think that you really effectively explained what interpreted about the poem. It is interesting that you thought that how this poem was written and laid out was similar to chats/messages on the internet. The use of colloquial language in the poem helped create the effect of reality. The poem spoke to me more because of the everyday informal words in it. I think that you made a decent analysis of the poem, but you lacked your own interpretations of the poem. The point of the blog post was to write down what you thought of the poem and how you interpreted it. You focused more on how the poem was actually structured. I think that for next time you should read the poem more thoroughly so that you find out its deeper meaning. -Neil 8B I think that you really effectively explained what interpreted about the poem. It is interesting that you thought that how this poem was written and laid out was similar to chats/messages on the internet. The use of colloquial language in the poem helped create the effect of reality. The poem spoke to me more because of the everyday informal words in it.

I think that you made a decent analysis of the poem, but you lacked your own interpretations of the poem. The point of the blog post was to write down what you thought of the poem and how you interpreted it. You focused more on how the poem was actually structured. I think that for next time you should read the poem more thoroughly so that you find out its deeper meaning.

-Neil 8B

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