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Comment on Handball assessment by David Noon

David Noon — Wed, 06 Feb 2013 00:26:14 +0000

Thank Jake. You clearly understand Handball and the rules. You have laid out two simple drills but I think more detail is required on them. Perhaps more content is needed and some diagrams or pictures.
You did very well on the performance side in Handball. Well done.

Comment on Poem Smoking by cigarette

cigarette — Fri, 01 Feb 2013 19:55:54 +0000

Thank you for a great post. Bookmarked! Regards, Chris

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Comment on My music song by Mr. Johnston

Mr. Johnston — Thu, 29 Nov 2012 10:43:45 +0000

Hi Jake. Reggae is a great genre of music and Bob Marley is the king of it. The timing of your performance is pretty good. You might want to work on your phrasing. You make good use of combining long and short sustains. I wonder if playing this with a drum machine would help you get in the groove more. Keep practicing.

Comment on Humanities by モンクレールダウン

モンクレールダウン — Wed, 28 Nov 2012 09:12:59 +0000

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Comment on Poem Smoking by 17sreedharr

17sreedharr — Fri, 16 Nov 2012 02:58:58 +0000

I think the poem has a strong feeling of smoking. They mixed the boring background and grey mood with the spark of flame from the cigarette. I think this a really strong and effective poem. I think this poem is good for a death anniversary

Comment on Poem Smoking by 17woodg

17woodg — Fri, 16 Nov 2012 02:21:06 +0000

The poem is very detailed, and I agree with your analysis Jake. The steps of the smoking is very slow and detailed. My favourite part is “Like a shako of horses dragging a hearse through the late.” This is very descriptive, and provides a very clear image. “Dull Metal,” is a great Onomatopoeia. It gives a great image of the metal, being hard, and tough, dull, like when a human being is not feeling well.

Overall, I liked your blog post! Well done!

Comment on Poem Smoking by Sena

Sena — Fri, 16 Nov 2012 02:20:19 +0000

I think this poem doesn’t have any onomatopoeia in it. I think this poem describes a lot about smoking. I think it also says that smoking is bad for you and you shouldn’t do it. I can see this from the part that says “poisons in the pink”. Overall, I think you did very well explaining the poem and it was enjoyable.

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