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Comment on English Poem assessment by Harrison

Harrison — Wed, 14 Nov 2012 04:01:47 +0000

I have the same but different thoughts as you. I think its about the last wolf being scared because its alone, and it has none of its kind with it. So it comes to the human through a ruin of house’s. The ruined city and comes to the girl fast. Avoiding all the stop and go trafic lights, just going to help, to tell were his kind went so he can be with them, his kind. And then he finds her and some how she has a sense and knows what has happened. And thats where the poem stops, so thats what I think about the poem.

Comment on English Poem assessment by 17matsumural

17matsumural — Wed, 14 Nov 2012 03:51:55 +0000

Honestly I think I have a totally different feeling against this poem. I think it’s talking about all of the crime that you have executed, and that it chases you forever until you admit that you made the wrong choice. It’s really fast and you need to admit it or it’s going to eat you. Although I have a different opinion as you, I agree in one point that the wolf has a special meaning. Overall, I think you chose a really good poem and both your opinion and mine are right.

Comment on English Poem assessment by 17harmanda

17harmanda — Tue, 13 Nov 2012 11:21:17 +0000

I agree with all your statements. I also think that the description of the apparition of the wolf in the poem kind of reminds people of old movies and books. I also think that it could be like you searching something in the dark and suddenly something appears out of nowhere. I think that you gave a lot a examples and that your statements are good. But maybe you can find for other interpretations than the ones you already have. I founded this poem really interesting, but I also founded hard to get at the beiginning. Again, I agree with your interpretation of this poem.

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Comment on What have you learn in English class? by Kate

Kate — Wed, 20 Jun 2012 00:02:37 +0000

I think that the writing techniques were really important to us. For example, smilies, metaphors and other techniques. I think, as a class, we have really developed our writing skills. We really gained our knowledge about this

Comment on What have you learn in English class? by Kate

Kate — Tue, 19 Jun 2012 00:44:16 +0000

I think you should fix your sentences because some of them don’t really make sense. I think we did learn a lot of new different things about the lives of others and how different it is to us. These three novels, as you said above, are really the most heart touching stories to me that I can’t forget because there is so much depth in it.
Great job!

Comment on English reflective post by Ms Clifford

Ms Clifford — Sat, 26 May 2012 23:54:50 +0000

You have chosen a relevant Learner Profile trait Shiho. You do think about what we are studying and discussing in class, and make very good connections between the text and real life. I enjoy your contributions in class and am pleased to see you are expressing yourself more clearly and patiently. Thank you for the thoughtful post.

Comment on International Games assignment by Mr T

Mr T — Wed, 07 Mar 2012 05:13:35 +0000

Hi Shiho,
A – 5
C – 5
D – 6
I think your assignment, whist on the right track, lacked detail at times. i would like to know more about your thoughts. I also thought that you tried hard for most of the time in PE class and did so with a positive attitude.
Mr T

Comment on Science Food Test Project by FOOD!! | NO WAR!!!

FOOD!! | NO WAR!!! — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 01:40:17 +0000

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Comment on Cross country Reflection… by David Noon

David Noon — Tue, 22 Nov 2011 05:33:22 +0000

Thank you for your reflection Shiho. You did well in the unit but next year needs to see you really put some extra effort into to get two laps done without stopping. You can do it if you try.