Comments for Student Life http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak 17tanakak's Blog and Life Wed, 06 Feb 2013 00:34:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/?v=3.4.1 Comment on P.E. Handball Assessment Task by David Noon http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2013/02/05/p-e-handball-assessment-task/comment-page-1/#comment-70 David Noon Wed, 06 Feb 2013 00:34:13 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=627#comment-70 Keigo, This is a fantastic piece of work and just what I was looking for. You have clearly demonstrated a sound understanding of Handball. You present your knowledge very effectively and include diagrams to make the explanation easier. Well done. Excellent piece of work! Keigo,

This is a fantastic piece of work and just what I was looking for. You have clearly demonstrated a sound understanding of Handball. You present your knowledge very effectively and include diagrams to make the explanation easier.
Well done. Excellent piece of work!

]]> Comment on Poetry Blogging by Ryan http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2012/11/15/poetry-blogging/comment-page-1/#comment-66 Ryan Mon, 03 Dec 2012 04:24:09 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=604#comment-66 It is great when you can fully understand a poem. A lot of poems contain metaphors which can sometimes confuse the reader or give them a false perception of the poem, so great job on understanding the poem. It is great when you can fully understand a poem. A lot of poems contain metaphors which can sometimes confuse the reader or give them a false perception of the poem, so great job on understanding the poem.

]]> Comment on Goodbye Niseko, Hello again Yokohama (Day 5) by Mrs Holovecz http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2012/11/16/goodbye-niseko-hello-again-yokohama-day-5/comment-page-1/#comment-65 Mrs Holovecz Sat, 17 Nov 2012 08:23:24 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=616#comment-65 No, you're not graded for this but there will be a comment about this work in your semester 1 report - so, nice to read your "thank you's" in this post! Pity you didn't always focus on the AOI in your posts, but overall, I enjoyed reading about your adventures during FS. No, you’re not graded for this but there will be a comment about this work in your semester 1 report – so, nice to read your “thank you’s” in this post!
Pity you didn’t always focus on the AOI in your posts, but overall, I enjoyed reading about your adventures during FS.

]]> Comment on Poetry Blogging by 17tutturenn http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2012/11/15/poetry-blogging/comment-page-1/#comment-64 17tutturenn Fri, 16 Nov 2012 03:22:43 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=604#comment-64 I found this poem quite challenging to understand. And so I was very interested in your poem. However, I personally did not think I understood this poem any better from reading your poem analysis. I think you could have explored more areas in this analysis, and just generally could be improved. I liked the poem in general, but it was really hard to understand. I think this poem analysis is going a bit off topic as well. You should follow and answer some of the questions on the google docs post. You did mention the senses either. I think you have some good points, but it could be improved a lot. I found this poem quite challenging to understand. And so I was very interested in your poem. However, I personally did not think I understood this poem any better from reading your poem analysis. I think you could have explored more areas in this analysis, and just generally could be improved. I liked the poem in general, but it was really hard to understand. I think this poem analysis is going a bit off topic as well. You should follow and answer some of the questions on the google docs post. You did mention the senses either. I think you have some good points, but it could be improved a lot.

]]> Comment on Poetry Blogging by 17marcusg http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2012/11/15/poetry-blogging/comment-page-1/#comment-63 17marcusg Fri, 16 Nov 2012 02:46:15 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=604#comment-63 Keigo, your blog post was good but was very general you should of tell more about the poem and use Ms. Holovecz google document wich explained what questions you were supposed to answer, you didn't answer most of them. but i still liked how you connected a bagel to happiness and enjoyment it really makes me think how can a bagel cause happiness and enjoyment. in your oral presentation maybe try to find something else that interest you on the poem, analyze more. Keigo, your blog post was good but was very general you should of tell more about the poem and use Ms. Holovecz google document wich explained what questions you were supposed to answer, you didn’t answer most of them.
but i still liked how you connected a bagel to happiness and enjoyment it really makes me think how can a bagel cause happiness and enjoyment.
in your oral presentation maybe try to find something else that interest you on the poem, analyze more.

]]> Comment on Poetry Blogging by 17grandumh http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/2012/11/15/poetry-blogging/comment-page-1/#comment-62 17grandumh Thu, 15 Nov 2012 14:10:36 +0000 http://blogs.yis.ac.jp/17tanakak/?p=604#comment-62 Keigo, i personally think the choice of poem was great. You covered the area of describing what you saw from reading the poem but i think you could still describe in more detail. Also using the poetic devies to analyse the poem is a good idea. I also had the feeling of what happened in the end. I am still curious. Overall i think you did good analyzing this poem and i agreed with a lot of what you said. Keigo, i personally think the choice of poem was great. You covered the area of describing what you saw from reading the poem but i think you could still describe in more detail. Also using the poetic devies to analyse the poem is a good idea. I also had the feeling of what happened in the end. I am still curious. Overall i think you did good analyzing this poem and i agreed with a lot of what you said.

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