Comments for Ren's Blog

Comment on Goals by 17manzonc

17manzonc — Fri, 09 Mar 2012 01:15:08 +0000

Your blog post is well written and you have good goals.

Comment on PE IRL by Kitchen Cabinets

Kitchen Cabinets — Mon, 26 Dec 2011 07:42:19 +0000

nice and useful!
i would like to say thank you about this cool post & your Decent a site….
thank you!

Comment on Cross Country Reflection by Mrs. Clark

Mrs. Clark — Sun, 27 Nov 2011 14:19:40 +0000

Congratulations on getting the fastest time on cross country day. That must have been a wonderful way to finish the cross country unit for you! You were already a fast runner at the beginning and my guess is that it was not easy to get faster. Your goal was very realistic and an appropriate challenge for you. Nice job!

Comment on PE IRL by Mr T

Mr T — Fri, 07 Oct 2011 06:00:44 +0000

Criteria A – 4
Criteria D – 6
HI Ren,
Thanks for your assignment. Whilst some of your answers lack detail and depth, I can see that you are starting to understand internationalism, sharing culture and that sport has a big part to play in this. For next time, please consider writing a bit more about the topics and come and share with the teacher before its due. That way your final result will be better. Well done for displaying excellent skill and a good approach in PE.

Mr T

Comment on G7 Science Food Test by 17uenishim

17uenishim — Wed, 28 Sep 2011 00:53:30 +0000

I like your slide show. I learned alot about dried mango but I think you can make it make interesting.

Comment on G7 Science Food Test by 17vailm

17vailm — Wed, 28 Sep 2011 00:45:57 +0000

Your text was a little small, so it made it hard to read and your presentation was kind of boring because there were no pictures. Also you weren’t very detailed in your work and explanations. Other than that you did a pretty good job.

Comment on G7 Science Food Test by Thomas

Thomas — Wed, 28 Sep 2011 00:42:38 +0000

It would be easier to judge if I could actually read the text.
Thomas

Comment on Marvelous Tutorial by Johnelle

Johnelle — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 14:23:36 +0000

Hey, that post leaevs me feeling foolish. Kudos to you!

Comment on Evaluate Reflection-Tutorial by Kim Cofino

Kim Cofino — Thu, 26 May 2011 02:18:54 +0000

Well done Ren! I’m so glad to see how useful planning was for you. I totally agree that planning made creating your finished project easier, along with the peer review process. Having someone look at your work before you are finished and turn it in can really make a big difference in how the final product turns out. Good learning, Ren!

Comment on Create Reflection by Kim Cofino

Kim Cofino — Fri, 20 May 2011 01:19:04 +0000

Good job Ren! Your tutorial is clear and easy to follow and you did a great job including labeled screenshots for each step. I would have liked to hear your voice and to see you challenge yourself by adding screencasting (video) instead of just images.