Comments for George's Blog

Comment on Song by MR. Johnston

MR. Johnston — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 02:11:33 +0000

Nice George. Here are some things I thought were the highlights.
1. I liked the 1/8th note synth part that enters around 55 seconds
2. The chime bells and guitar was very effective
3. nice drum fills
4. interesting development of the song – it kept me interested and wanting to listen
Some things to work on:
1. there are a few parts that the lines conflict tonally. There is some dissonance. This may or may not be wanted depending on your perspective as the composer but as a listener I thought there was a few instances where the pitches could be altered for a more consonant effect.
Love it and I want to hear MORE!
Mr. Johnston

Comment on Physical Education – Handball Assesment by David Noon

David Noon — Wed, 06 Feb 2013 01:17:01 +0000

Thanks George. You demonstrate a sound knowledge of the rules and objectives of handball. Well done. You present two nice drills which are clearly explained. Perhaps diagrams or pictures might have improved this. On the performance side you needed to get a bit more involved. Sometimes passages of play pass you by without involvement. However, your enthusiasm is always very good. Well done.

Comment on #2 Hokkaido Field Studies by 17woodg

17woodg — Thu, 15 Nov 2012 21:19:37 +0000

It was good in some ways, but some bits were not very good.
Thank you for reading!

Comment on Poetry Analysis by 17saitoj

17saitoj — Thu, 15 Nov 2012 06:44:09 +0000

I think you did a really good job on telling what the poem is about. I was nice that you talked about your self but you should be more positive because I lost respect for you. You talked how it will be if it is in a funeral and that was very understanding. You talked about the poetic devices and that was very nice, but you should be positive. :( jkjk :D

Comment on Poetry Analysis by Sena

Sena — Thu, 15 Nov 2012 06:41:22 +0000

I think your blog post was easy to understand and had a lot of useful information. I think it was interesting how you compared yourself to the poem. I think you also identified all the poetic device and you described them in detail. I thought the poem was about how you have a bad day sometimes but you have to over come the problem. Overall, I think you did very well on analyzing the poem.

Comment on My Awesome Stereogram by 17machinj

17machinj — Fri, 17 Aug 2012 02:44:29 +0000

nice

Comment on Story Completed!!!!!!! by Ms. Madrid

Ms. Madrid — Wed, 23 May 2012 07:36:09 +0000

I’m looking forward to reading it!

Comment on About Me by 17woodg

17woodg — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 08:12:54 +0000

Thank you very much Charlie! I will help you on YouTube Channel!

Comment on About Me by Charlie Wood

Charlie Wood — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 08:10:48 +0000

I like your blog!! My favorite bit about it is that I like the background and I like your favorite song. I like Pokémon too!!
Hope to see more posts. My favorite part of the background is the picture of starfox he looks very strong.

Hope you do well!!

Charlie

Comment on Music Reflection by 17woodg

17woodg — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 20:54:33 +0000

I don’t, but I can play it at home, and then I can send it to you.
Love George