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My tutorial: How to write a Kanji
Posted on April 10th, 2012 at 1:35 am by and

 

As you can see from my previous posts, we have been Creating tutorials to help other kids learn and understand things. We all chose topics related to school for example, how to read notes or how to pronounce words. We just finished creating our tutorial and looked at other people’s tutorials. We did this by visiting other classmate’s blog and commenting few things on their tutorials.

While creating my tutorial, I learnt that it’s important to look at your tutorial from the audiences’s perspective within yourself.
I learnt how to use imovie and some other skills on imovie for example, how to cut parts and how to do a “Picture in picture”. I learnt that by exploring it with the class.
When it was the first time Ms. Cofino introduced us to this unit, I didn’t exactly know what the word “tutorial” actually meant. I heard and saw the word many times but couldn’t explain it. But while going further through the unit, I already knew what it meant.

I am very happy with my finished tutorial because I’ve put many effort in to it and I think the quality of the video is reasonable. I think I’ve explained almost everything to help the audiences. The class Criteria was the most helpful thing for me during this unit.
I really liked the last minute I finished my tutorial because I felt like I achieved and accomplished something. I think that was because we spent about a month to create our tutorial which was very long. Not only about my tutorial but I’m also happy that I was able to learn something new. I wasn’t really happy about how I was speaking all the way through the tutorial. It was really embarrassing when I was showing it to the teacher…

The most difficult thing while creating my tutorial was when I was filming at my house. There were so many background noises from my little brother playing and screaming and a lot of noise from my mom’s dish washing sounds. It was also hard to not film my whole body while filming myself writing. (I didn’t want to film myself because I was wearing a nightwear :P )
The easy part was when I was adding sub titles to my video on imovie. It was easy because I’ve practiced this quite a few times.

I think the top 4 Criteria that meets my tutorial is Repetition, Spoken instructions, voice and Clear directions.
Repetition: I repeated some instructions 2 or 3 times so that the audience does not forget it for example, “to not start a line from the bottom or the right”.
Spoken Instructions: I said the instructions while acting it out through the whole tutorial.
Voice: I think my voice was loud enough for the audiences to hear and I’ve put enthusiasm in my voice.
Clear directions: I had clear directions on what to do for the audiences. I think I’ve explained everything specificly.
Personally, I think the most important criteria you should have in a tutorial is Clear directions, On topic and voice.
It is important to have clear directions because or else, there will be no point of making the tutorial. If you have clear directions you are giving a chance to the audience to learn something which means you’re doing something good for them.
It is very important for you to stay on topic because then the audience will just go on bored. If you are on topic, the audience will very much enjoy the tutorial.
It is also important to have a clear voice because then the audience cannot hear you. It will also be boring.

To make my tutorial even better, I want to know the filming techniques and skills. This will make it easier for the audience to watch your tutorials too. I also want to know other softwares to help edit my videos so that it is easier when I edit the video.

When I was done I looked at 5 people’s tutorial, elina, julia, kate, Daiki and Taro.
From Elina’s tutorial, I learned how to change the appearances on your blog for example, the widget, theme and background.
From Julia’s tutorial, I learned how to remember different Kanji’s.
From Kate’s tutorial, I learned how to remember the notes of the 13 string koto.
From Daiki’s tutorial , I learned how to make a pass in soccer.
From Taro’s tutorial , I learned how to dribble and do a cross over in basketball.

In conclusion, I’ve really really really enjoyed this unit. It was the first time experiencing and making a tutorial so I was scared at first, but I just realized that it is really fun. When I was making this tutorial, it was like being a teacher. I think I’ve improved on speaking. It wasn’t very scary but it seemed awkward talking to a computer. During the unit, I learned many things. I think I’ve learned more than learning things in Maths.
I’m looking forward to the next unit in technology and I’m very excited!



Comments so far:

  1. Link Here | April 10, 2012,

    Hi Raveena!
    I looked at your tutorial and I thought it was a wonderful tutorial. The part which you actually wrote the kanji made the tutorial fantastic. I also liked that you put your hand on the side which made it easier to look at the paper with the kanji written on it.
    I learned that it is very important to write the kanji top to bottom left to right!
    You almost had all the criteria in your tutorial. The criteria that you were missing is the pace. Some parts were to fast and it went to the next part before I could read the sentences that you wrote.
    But overall I think your tutorial was wonderful!

    julia

  2. Link Here | April 10, 2012,

    I think your portrait is good because you gave some good example how Kanji works out. Not only that, your voice was clear so it was really easy to hear. Except I think your volume was kind of small.
    I learned that there is a rule for how to write kanji. For example, not bottom to up, you write top to bottom or not from right to left, it is left to right.
    I think the criteria it meets is criteria D. If I was giving you a score out of 6, I will make you 6.

    tomoka

  3. Link Here | April 15, 2012,

    Hi Raveena,

    I would like to comment on your blog for my tech HW. ww

    By having a finished example of a kanji while you are showing how to write it was a really good idea because then the people who are trying to write the same kanji, will be able to write it easier. I also liked the way you told each step carefully by also demonstrating what you are talking about at the same time because as I said, for the people who are watching will get to understand more and will get to copy the same thing and improve.

    From this tutorial video I learned that it is very important to speak with expression because when you were talking when demonstrating, you had lots of expressions in your voice, and it was very easy to listen.

    Your tutorial video fits the criteria of “Detailed”. It means that you don’t skip steps, so the person watching can do the exact same thing.

    I really liked your video. I think this video will really help people who wants to learn kanjis.

    Keina

    Keina

  4. Link Here | April 17, 2012,

    i thought that your tutorial was good because you were showing clearly what to do while saying how to do it,because that would help the viewer do it easily on the first or second time.
    I really didn’t learn much from this tutorial because i can already write kanji but in the future,if I need to teach someone,I think these kinds of videos would help to use.
    I think that this video would be a good clear,step-by-step video with good pacing and good volume.

    Daiki

    Daiki

  5. Link Here | April 17, 2012,

    oops,put my name twice.

    Daiki

  6. Link Here | April 17, 2012,

    Hi

    Firstly it didn’t sound like your voice but don’t care too much about it.
    I liked the part where you mentioned the rules and the history of kanji words.
    You had a clear voice+good pacing and there was not much background noise.
    I think this will help the people who are starting to learn kanji.

      Yudai |    Reply

    • Link Here | April 17, 2012,

      Thank you for all the positive comments~

      raveena

  7. Link Here | May 10, 2012,

    Fantastic work Raveena! I’m so glad you learned so much during this unit and that you are so proud of your tutorial – I am proud of you too! You will make a great teacher! I hope you continue to create even more tutorials.

    Kim Cofino

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