In English we watched Indiana Jones Raiders of the Lost Ark.
We then were assigned to experts groups about different topics. I was put into the Symbolism group along with Johan, Charlotte and Sean. We then made a Voice Thread presentation where we talked about our reflection. Below is our group reflection. Hope you enjoy!
When I write stories I should try to connect my paragraphs so the reader understands the order. I should try to use more connecting words to connect my paragraphs. I should try to use better grammar. In the exam I used “ing” in the wrong place when I should’ve used “ed.” In a news report reporters exaggerate stories so it catches more of the reader’s attention. I think I can develop this skill even more.
How will I do it?
When I read books or newspapers I should look how the author or reporter connects the paragraphs so I can develop my own skills. In a news report the reporter connects each paragraph with one sentence or word so people are still hooked with the idea. When reading a book or story the author is really good at using the right grammar. So when I read books I should look at how and where they use it so when I write a story I can use the right grammar. Sometimes when I tell a story I sometimes exaggerate the story. I think I should transfer this into my stories.
In English I have been reading a detective book called Murder on The Orient Express by Agatha Christie. I thought this book was full of suspense and mystery.
I had 1 comment on my first podcast and the person said to add more questions. I think I didn’t put these things into this podcast. I should improve on these if we have a next podcast.
I think if I worked with other people we could have a discussion about the book and we could put our ideas to make an even better podcast since a group of people are contributing their ideas so the podcast would be great.
I could improve by putting in more questions then answer them. I could also sound more enthusiastic so the audience would think that I really liked this book which I did.
Below is my podcast if you have any comment or questions comment.