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Line Drawing Reflection

In grade 7 art class in the past 10 to 12 weeks we have been working on drawing our own line drawings,with a scenery that we choose our selves and put together with 3 or 4 pictures. With help from the Vincent Van Gogh and other students line drawings that we have looked at ,we started our own. Our unit question is “How can we communicate visually?” , meaning can the shadows, textures, tone, lines and other techniques show what weather, what the artist is trying to show or location?And significant concept is “Line can be convey shape, texture and tone.” In the past classes we have looked and explored at lot’s of line techniques and how to show where the sun is shinning, what weather and how to make trees actually look like realistic trees with just lines. When drawing, one of the important things that we need to remember is that the drawings should have a clear foreground, middle ground and background.

But before we drew our own we practiced drawing by choosing a Van Gogh line drawing and try to draw it, because for most of us I am pretty sure it is the first time drawing a whole scenery on a big paper with just different lines. These below are my practice tries at line drawing, they are both a line drawing by Van Gogh. It was really hard on our practices but I don’t think it is a bad start.

1st practice try

2nd practice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For my piece of drawing I chose 3 different pictures that had some kind of relationship with each other and I cropped it, fixed it, edit and cut it. The pictures I chose was of a big tent in the fore ground, hawk for middle ground and more tents and a big hill for the background. The scene is set on the grasslands in mongolia on a beautiful sunny day.

Here are the 3 pictures that I put together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And this is how it looks like when I put them together after my cropping.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I choose this scenery because one of  the pictures caught my eye when I was looking through some images so I decided to do this scenery as my final scenery because I always wanted to go to such a beautiful open grassland on a beautiful sunny day like in the pictures I chose, also maybe because it is part of my culture.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Above is my final drawing. I worked especially hard on the grass and hill because it is all stippling. I thought the shading on the houses were hard to draw because I needed to think about if the shadow would match the tone on the grass and hill and how much shading should I do. Now looking back at my final drawing I am ralizing more places that I should fix and do better next time.

I think that my strengths in this drawing are drawing the hill and the stippling on the hill, because I think that really shows that the hill is lighter than the grass below because the light of the sun is shining on the hill. Also because the shadows on the hill looks natural, so I think that I put good tone and texture. We had a walk around tables in class when everyone in our class finished drawing, we all had to leave a comment about the strength and weakness we think about the other persons drawing. I had some comments saying that how I drew my sky and clouds were really good, I think I might agree to that because I really like how I also made the sky stand out in the background. The texture on my sky and how I showed my clouds I thought was pretty cool, but I think the sky could also be a weakness. Lastly I like how I drew the houses because I used thick lines and thin lines dot, not only just a straight line, so I thought that ended up nice too.

My sky, clouds and part of my hill. I used stippling and hatching.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think my weaknesses are as I mentioned in my strengths, my sky could also be a weakness because the more I look at it I think the sky is a little too thick compared to most of my drawing parts, not the sky but my clouds so if I spread out the darkness a bit more it would be good. Another weakness is that my grass to me it does not look quite right, because I didn’t quite spread out the shadow to make it look natural, so I didn’t quite get the gradation right. I always hold my work up and stand back a little to see it because you can spot a lot of small bits that you forgot, missed or messed up, I did this at the end and I spotted that as I mentioned above that the patches of grasses that are darker I drew too drack so I will watch out for this kind of mistake next time.

A part of the grass.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall I am really proud of my work because it really shows a lot of progress through this unit and has lots of different types of techniques like tone, texture and stippling. I never thought before that I could actually draw a drawing on a huge piece of paper with just different line techniques, so this is a real surprise. I really enjoyed this unit, impressed with my work, happy that it’s done and that it was a success and looking forward to learning new stuff about visual art in our next unit.

 

My Visual Journal

During this unit I think that I improved on my designing skills because at the beginning of the unit I did not have almost any creative ideas for layout and drawings but throughout the unit I learned a lot of ways to layout my pages and what is the most eye catching thing when a human’s eyes looks at. As I looked at more examples of other artist’s drawing and I noticed that if you have a drawing or picture that you want to focus on on the side of the page it catches eye attention more than the middle of the page.

My strengths when I was doing my visual journal was my different fonts and design/layout because I used different types of fonts that I thought would match what we did on that day and a color to match it. I thought my writing and fonts were good because it is understandable and same time not boring. I also thought my design and layout was good because I didn’t just put something big in the middle like I used to do but instead for example one of the days I put only one drawing really big on the side then the writing half on top of it on the opposite side. I also liked how I used my colors because It was outstanding and a match for each day, when I matched colors together I first matched them out on another paper to see if the colors look good with each other because sometimes two colors look really bad with each other such as yellow and brown to me. I think that my weaknesses were one the first day page because I did not think of anything and just put stuff on randomly and it ended up a bad idea because everything had to end up a little bit squashed up. So next time I will first maybe plan everything out lightly with a pencil especially the first day because it is the first thing you write on the notebooks so I usually don’t think and get excited. Also maybe on one of my pages is too blank so I could fill up that space that is left with something instead.

But I really think that I improved a lot than before in layout, design, colors and font/writing. Before I would always write my writing either on the top or bottom then stick pictures sideways all over the page. Overall I had really fun learning new techniques that I never thought about and looking at different types of drawing , fonts and design. If we did another visual journal next year I think that it will be much more interesting and better than this years on