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Comment on What music music sound like it does by Mr. Johnston

Mr. Johnston — Mon, 13 May 2013 00:55:21 +0000

Good post about the instruments. Can you explain further about how the music sounds Japanese? What about the scales, techniques, and tunings used?

Comment on Racism Through the Lens of Fear by Susie Clifford

Susie Clifford — Wed, 13 Mar 2013 04:16:39 +0000

Jack – you have made a few interesting points and I liked your connection to someone challenging the boundaries of racism. I wonder if you could have discussed racism more through fear, and how that effects people’s lives. Through the texts we have read and viewed, I am sure you could have written an insightful post about how racism and fear are connected.
Please use paragraphs to organise your ideas – it makes it so much easier for the reader.

Comment on Freedom by Susie Clifford

Susie Clifford — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 02:22:42 +0000

You had discussed some fundamental aspects of freedom and spoke about lots of different ways freedom is important to you. A lot of what you have identified is connected to safety as well, and everyone should have the freedom to feel safe. Your image is interesting and I would like to hear about how this represents freedom from your point of view. You did need to link to someone else’s post to show you have read what someone else has written.

Comment on Heart rate chart by Robert

Robert — Fri, 21 Dec 2012 11:39:32 +0000

Wow.. Above heart rate charts are really useful one.. Even we don't want heart rate monitors.. B'coz that charts explains well...

Comment on Haert voice thread by Johan Standar

Johan Standar — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 06:55:21 +0000

I like your voicethread it was really clear and explained a lot. you explained most from the six bullet points, you said a lot about the four different chamber but you might of missed a bit. Im not 100 percent sure if I heard the fact you found the veins and the arteries but I think you did a good job on the voicethread.

Comment on How my world view has changed by Johan Standar

Johan Standar — Mon, 01 Oct 2012 11:20:07 +0000

I agree with both of you fish and other creatures that live in the sea are dying and it is very sad, fishing can be fun if you at least release it back into the water like I do. Fish levels are going down now, which means the sea is dying.

Comment on How my world view has changed by Elina

Elina — Mon, 01 Oct 2012 08:52:37 +0000

I agree— used to think fishing was good, but it is killing the sea

Comment on Tutor smart goals by SMART Goals

SMART Goals — Tue, 25 Sep 2012 02:30:49 +0000

Once you have planned your project, turn your attention to developing several goals that will enable you to be successful. Goals should be SMART – specific, measurable, agreed upon, realistic and time-based.

Comment on Time Management by Time Management | jack's blog « Management Fair

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Comment on Tutor smart goals by Mr T

Mr T — Tue, 11 Sep 2012 23:08:48 +0000

Hi Jack,
Your first 2 goals were very well done. I like how they are measurable and whilst they are important goals, are they specific to swimming? Maybe make your 3rd goal a swimming or fitness goal (a sporting goal could be related to the football team??) (as it stands, it is just a copy of your first goal).
Nice one!
Mr T