Speech – best holiday

7A Drama: Informative Speech05 from YIS Arts on Vimeo.

I do not know what my best skill is however, I think my best skill was that I had some volume because I get nervous most of the times, but even though I’m nervous I think I have good volume each time. I think it would have been better if I had more volume though. I should improve on looking at the audience more and have more emotion into my speech because when I look at my palm cards most of the time, I can’t look at the audience’s face to see if they are enjoying my speech or not. Also, if I don’t have emotion in my words, it will be boring and if I have more emotion I can express how I feel more.

My speech didn’t meet the time that was 2 minutes to 3 minutes. If I had more details in my speech I think it would meet the time and also make it more understanding to the audiences. I didn’t have any hand gestures so I think maybe next time I can use gestures too.


Another speech which was captivating was Grace’s:

7A Drama: Informative Speech16 from YIS Arts on Vimeo.

I think her best skill was her volume and the way she caught the audience’s attention which is the hook. I think her skill is volume because she makes her voice stronger for the place she wants to tell the audience more. Also her hook shows both sides of opinions.

I think she can improve talking more smoothly because she sometimes stopped. If she had more practice time, I think it would have been a wonderful speech.



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