The mime I am going to examine is Kai’s and Benjamin’s.
The mime showed two men, probably businessmen. They opened the door by praying to it, though they tried other methods including and shooting it.
They mimed being affected to show objects, e.g a gun. They also mimed actions with clothes/shoes. They showed the size by the space between each other. This showed the space of which the door took up.
I think they showed the mime quite well, but there were 3 things which I think they could have improved on
Firstly I think Benjamin did not either put down the gun, or throw it away, so it seemed like it just vanished.
Secondly I think that when they were trying to show the door being locked, Kai seemed to fling the door.
Finally I think that they did not show much weight during the mime, so maybe they could add that or make it clearer.