Plan reflection


In the plan stage of the design cycle we did a few things : storyboard,outline,timeline and now the reflect part of the design cycle. I am going to show you my storyboard and my timeline plan and I am going to explain it. Also I chose some things out of a list that we made with the class that we thought was important for our tutorials.

First my storyboard:

In here I am telling about what I want to show in my tutorial that I am going to make for technology. I want to make a tutorial about the basics of Dutch so people who want to learn some Dutch they can learn already the basics of the language and then they can already speak some.
I chose to make the basics of Dutch not more, because otherwise it would get a little bit messy and maybe some people will get confused because there are so many words in one video so I decided to do just the basics. I also thought I also need to learn the people some typical Dutch things because I thought people maybe find that interesting.

So I needed to choose three class criteria that I think I am going to do good in my tutorial. Here are my three criteria:
1. Step by step because otherwise you are doing everything in one time and then it might get messed up.
I am going to demonstrate this by show and do everything in steps not everything in one  time. Also I am doing everything a own take not everything in one take.
2. Credits so I can show  the people who helped me with making my tutorial.
I am going to make on the very end a clip with all the credits with the people who helped my with making my tutorial.
3. Focus so I focus on just one thing that is in my tutorial: the basics not other things.
I am doing this by doing just the basics of Dutch

I chose these criteria because I thought they were important for my tutorial.

Now my timeline plan. In my timeline I show what I want/need to do for my tutorial and what I need to get to make my tutorial. And also when I think it must be done.

That was my plan for making my tutorial.

I think my tutorial is going to be a pretty good tutorial because I planned everything well and I know what I want to do for my tutorial. Also I think it is good for a tutorial to learn people something that they want to learn.
I think the people are going to understand things in my tutorial, because I am trying to do everything not so fast and everybody can follow what I am saying in my tutorial.
I think I still need to learn how to do more things about the program for making/editing my tutorial.

I think you now know that planning for making a tutorial is not so simple. And also what you need to do in your tutorial and what not? Also you need to do things in steps not everything in one time.

EAL writing task

For EAL we needed to make a writing task about acts of kindness here is mine.:


An act of kindness means that you are doing kind things to people to help them. An act of kindness is a kind act you are doing to someone and you want to show you are good person by doing something nice to the other people.


Here’s an example of an act of kindness. Mr. Fedly helped his sister when she did not go to school for a day and  left noodles in the sink. When his mother came home his mother saw the noodles in the two minute sink and then he said to his mother ‘I did it” because otherwise his sister could get in big trouble and when he said it he have got in less trouble then when  his sister got in trouble and he did not say “I did it”.


Here’s another example. Ms. Cofino helped Ms. Clifford. Ms. Clifford had a question, she asked Ms. Cofino to help her. Then Ms. Cofino walked upstairs and asked for the answer and then they gave the answer and then she got down and told Ms Clifford the answer of the question. And she felt happy after It.


Young people like us can help as well. We can clean dishes give people what they need sometimes. Clean your and other rooms, We can cook some small things for our parents. We also can do things for people if they ask that. Also you can be nice to each other and do things for them and they for you.


If people do not help others, then the world would be a complete mess such as some people are handicapped and they can not do some things and then they need help from other people because otherwise they will never get the things they want to have such as nice food  that people make for you.

Also you will maybe when you are sick because nobody helps you to get the right things or medicine and you will die. So important is helping each other so help the people who need help.

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