The author uses metaphors and adjectives to clearly visualize situations or objects. By doing this, the author added colors into the story and made the reader visualize things better. The part I thought the author visualized the scenes very well is in chapter eight: “There was no sitting space and it felt as if all their breath was being squeezed out of them” (50). Because of the way the author used metaphors in this sentence, I could visualize very clearly how close together the people are in the train and how strongly Naledi and Tito are squashed together. Another good example is in chapter thirteen: “His face seemed nearly as white as his coat, except for the dark shadows under his eyes”. (77) I could visualize he is a white person because the author compared the doctors skin color and the white coat. I could also tell how tired the doctor is because the author wrote “the only dark color on his face is the shadow under his eyes.”
The author also used descriptive language combined with adjectives and metaphors to make the text easier for the readers to visualize.
The connection I found between the text and the world is that people used to be treated differently because of their race and the skin color. I could clearly see a example of this in chapter six when Naledi and Tiro were just about to jump aboard, when someone shouted at them in English. “what’s wrong with you? Are you stupid. They looked up at the angry face of the bus driver and then at the bus again. White faces stared at them from inside as the bus moved off” (39). I could tell that Naledi and Tiro couldn’t go in the bus because they were black and this is what used to happen in South Africa during 1948-1994.
The connection I found between me and Naledi is that we both are risk takers. Naledi’s risk taking attitude is shown in chapter 1: “We can get to the big road and walk,” (18). She knew the journey is going to be a very tough challenge because she had to travel 300 kilometers to arrive to Johannesburg. But she took risks to go to the journey to Johannesburg which I think is amazing.
I think I am a risk taker because I take risks in a lot of situations. Such an example is volunteering in class discussions, talking in front of the whole class. I often do this during drama, by volunteering to act in front of the whole class. I am not a very good english speaker so I think volunteering in class discussions is risky for me. Also in field studies I took a big risk by volunteering to do rock climbing. I am very scared of height so I think I took a lot of risks to do rock climbing.
The question I had after reading this book was what is going to happened after the story? Especially I am wondering what would happen to Naledi and Dineo’s future and if Dineo is going to be ill again. What persuaded me to think about this was in chapter fifteen: “Naledi fell asleep at last, picturing her first day back at school, surrounded by friends, old and new.” (89) This seemed like she was picturing something in the future and this persuaded me to think about the story after the book. If the story went on, I would want Naledi and Tito to have a good education, Naledi being able to be a successful doctor near the village and I wish Naledi. Dineo not being ill again.
The main idea this book was trying to tell us is of course about how apartheid made massive amounts of impacts to people’s livings, especially the poor non-whites people. But, the author is also trying to tell the reader how strong family bonds can make big impacts into people’s livings. You can tell this in this story because almost all person in Dineo’s family supported and helped her survive the Fever by Naledi and Tito traveling to Johannesburg to tell her to come back to the village to bringing the money for the hospital but also, all the family members who were waiting for them were cooling Dineo’s fever.
Over all I think this book was very advanced at hooking the reader’s attention and taking the reader on the journey with Naledi and Tito to Johannesburg. The author used excellent adjectives and metaphors to help visualize the text and there was a lot of connection between the text and the world because this book involved a lot of real examples of apartheid, which was a big problem for people living in South Africa. Personally I enjoyed reading this book which taught me what it feels like to live in a time period where there was apartheid but also taught us how important family’s bonds are.