I think overall the story was good and I think that the story choice was definitely easy to understand the life lesson. I think that the illustrations were also good but maybe the story itself was a bit too violent because there were some parts where people were getting killed and I sometimes flipped two pages or read the wrong part or lost track of where I was so made some things up so I think that I could of made the words a little bit more clearer so that I could read it without taking time and making up some parts. I could also make it a bit more interactive because it was just me reading it and nothing that the Grade 1’s could do with their hands.
I think that first I did not really use my time effectively but around the middle I started to use my time more wisely but because I did not use my time effectively at the start so I was a bit tight on time so I think that I should of used it wisely throughout the whole process. At first I didn’t really like drawing because I wasn’t use to it and was very bad at it but later on I got used to it so I started to get better so I think that that was something that I improved on and found easy around the middle and end. I have learned that you have to be patient to be good at something because I was very impatient first and you can see the difference between the start and the end because I started to become more patient around the end.
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