Science Research at the DR (Democratic Republic) of the Congo

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E laboration

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T opic sentence

In this one of the dangerous conflict zone in the world a lot of people mine Gold, Tantalum, Tin, Tungsten (3 T’s) for our technology, they are risking their life starting at child to an adult mining everyday with countless work hours no proper food poor paycheck bad place to live and for woman’s they can easily get sexualy harrased.

E laboration

In Congo the population has a short life expectancy since they live and work in a extremely dangerous place including mafia’s and lethal weapons and not a safest place to work as a 12 or 11 years old or lower. So every time you buy yourself an iphone just because your friends has a new one your making the population at Congo work facing life and death.

E xample

There was this woman that was walking home with her flower to feed her kids but while going home there was a man pointing a gun at the woman she thought she was going to be shot and murdered but instead she got raped. This explains that DR Congo is really dangerous you definitely won’t want to live there because you won’t be able to eat and drink good things. Since it is really easy to catch a disease it is really dangerous for children to live there you also have no money so you won’t be able to go to the doctors.   

E xplanation

Overall the population in congo has a very poor lifestyle and fighting for life and death mining. Buying iphone or any electricity is making kids mine in a dangerous place where you don’t want to be.

L ast/linking sentence

This can explain why congo is place that no one wants to go and that Iphone that you have perhaps made made the kids die in congo.

 

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https://www.google.co.jp/search?q=life+expectancy+at+DRC&oq=life+expectancy+at+DRC&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l2.14737j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

 

“Democratic Republic of the Congo – Life Expectancy at Birth 2015.” Countryeconomy.com, 20 Oct. 2017, countryeconomy.com/demography/life-expectancy/democratic-republic-congo.

 

“Life Expectancy at Birth, Total for the Democratic Republic of the Congo.” FRED, 18 Sept. 2017, fred.stlouisfed.org/series/SPDYNLE00INCOD.

 

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T opic sentence

In the conflict zone in democratic republic of the Congo is a place where a lot of people get murdered often with countless hours and low payment.

E laboration

There is a lot of people living in congo that needs to work sometimes for 24 hours straight. They have a really hard time living there because sexual assault happens constantly along with murder, when people live they need food and water to be able to move and work however since they don’t usually get paid they usually have to eat grasses etc.  

E xample

Congo being one of the worst country that you can live at is true because approximately half children under five are stunted. There is children’s working at the age of 12 and they work hard but they won’t get paid well meaning there is not enough money for them to eat and buy things. If you look at their house you know that they don’t have any money and they are desperate for it, when you don’t have money can’t buy anything. For example food, water, every day materials.

E xplanation

This can explain why people in congo is really struggling and working to death every day without getting paid the right amount. The population around congo perhaps will not think about it but children’s and adults are working not knowing when they die just because you wanted a new Iphone. It is really easy to catch a skin disease/disease because they don’t get to eat properly and they mine at a really dangerous place.   

L ast/linking sentence

Your decision can save a lot of lives in congo by buying electronics or not, donate if you can for them because their child’s can’t live properly and end up living their whole life not how they wanted to be.

 

MLA

19 January 2015 — Photo © WHO/Christopher Black. “10 Facts About Hunger In Democratic Republic of Congo | WFP | United Nations World Food Programme – Fighting Hunger Worldwide.” UN World Food Programme, 19 Jan. 2015, www.wfp.org/stories/10-facts-about-hunger-democratic-republic-congo.

 

T opic sentence

Talking about getting new electronics not because you needed to might not help for the kids in congo because they are all working at the age of approximately 12 or lower.

E laboration

The population in congo is really desperate for food and water because they simply don’t have them since they do not get paid well. There is also an event that is called World Day Against Child Labor in june 12, according to UNICEF there is about 40,000 child’s working, they sometimes have a shift for 24 hours underground and most earn less than 2$ there is also a lot get paid half amount.

E Xample

There is a lot of organizations complaining that there is a lot of childs under 7 working without proper cloths to protect themselves, also to make things worse it is not special for children to get buried alive when they are mining. There is also childs working at the military trained to kill people if they try to escape. When childs mine they fight with hunger, thirst, risk of getting skin disease/ disease also with burning eyes because there is toxic red dust sneaking into their eyes.

E Xplana

Child labour is one of the hardest things to stop because some think that it is normal for childs to work along with adults. Child labour is terrifying if you think about it properly because they are forced to work for a long time if not their whole life in Congo. These chiles are not living a comfortable life with working a lot and not being able to eat, drink sleep. (main things)    

L ast/linking sentence

You might be able to save their lives by donating clothes, money, goods. Or maybe trying to use your iphone for a long time and not to buy every time.

 

MLA

(www.dw.com), Deutsche Welle. “Child Labor Still Rife in Democratic Republic of Congo | Africa | DW | 11.06.2017.” DW.COM, www.dw.com/en/child-labor-still-rife-in-democratic-republic-of-congo/a-39194724.

 

Barbara Jones for The Mail on Sunday. “Child Miners Aged Four Living a Hell on Earth so YOU Can Drive an Electric Car: Awful Human Cost in Squalid Congo Cobalt Mine That Michael Gove Didn’t Consider in His ‘Clean’ Energy Crusade.” Daily Mail Online, Associated Newspapers, 6 Aug. 2017, www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4764208/Child-miners-aged-four-living-hell-Earth.html.