My audience was three 1st graders. They all said they enjoyed it because of the illustrations and the touchable things in the book. They also said that they liked the last page, where the life lesson is written on because the keywords are done in the glitter pens and it’s touchable. They said they didn’t have any feedback, and most of the time, all of them were looking at the book so I think they actually enjoyed it.

I think to improve, even if I explained in easier words, I can write the story in easier words because sometimes they looked confused with the words I chose. Also, next time, I would like to write the life lesson in no-glitter glue pens like the keywords because it was hard to read. I think I would like to keep the last page the same, because they all enjoyed pressing down on the bumpy glue pens and feeling the bumps of the keywords.