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It is called ‘word counter’. Simply cut and paste your writing to see if you are overusing any words. If so, grab that thesaurus and vary your lingo!
Today, we discussed basic beginning-middle-end structures of texts. We outlined the need for:
– a clearly defined overall topic
– a thesis about the main topic (main or important idea about the topic)
– sub-topics, or categories for information, that relate back to this main topic.
We then used pie graphs to think about our categories. We found that our research questions were a good way to help us create this sub-topics. Following this, we then thought about a logical order for these ideas. We found that:
* basic, general facts often come first
* details become more specific as we progress through the text
* there is often an influence of time/chronology; events are put in a chronological order
* the conclusion of something (or end of an event) often comes at the end… fancy that!
We then applied this process to our own topics. Here is what our focus groups came up with:
Finally, we examined some magazine articles, looking for elements of content, organisation and style/language. Here are our deconstructions:
Criterion (A) Content:
– interesting anecdotes / stories
– quotes from famous people
Criterion (B) Organisation:
– big title
– captions for pictures
– some indented quotes or important lines of text, written in a big box
– beginning, middle and end
Criterion (C) Style and Language Use:
– proper nouns (names of people and places)
– mix of first person and third person; sometimes there was a personal point of view, other times it was more distant
– different points of view
– noun phrases (complicated sounding words)
– present and past tense verbs (though we thought past tense would be more useful for us in this assignment)
In class today we have started analysing personal letters in preparation for our upcoming assesment.
We started with a practice analysis, with the improbable scenario of describing an apple to an alien who has never seen one before. By doing so, we found out that analysing means to ‘break down in order to bring out the essential elements or structure.’
Next, we did the same thing with some examples of personal letters. Here are the features that we came up with.
1) What are the different parts of a paragraph?
2) What is the function / importance of each of these parts?
3) How do all these parts ‘fit together’ to form a cohesive whole?
After reviewing some PIE/PEE strategy notes, students should look back at the burger metaphor and compare ideas. Complete a short ‘I used to think… Now I think…” in the comments box below re: paragraph structure.
1. What is a paragraph?
are made up of sentences (usually more than one sentence? 5-6 sentences?are usually about one “topic”/”part”/”segment”/”scene”
start on a new line; first sentence is indented (5 spaces/TAB)
have sentences which have something in common (each sentence leads into the next sentence)
separate different ideas (by grouping related ideas together)
organize your writing
organize the structure of your writing
make it easier to read/look nicer
allow the reader to come up for air/surface/take a breath
2. Are there different kinds of paragraphs?
different genres have different “paragraphs” (organizational structures) – poetry (stanzas), songs (verses), prose (paragraphs)
fiction vs. non-fiction (articles, essays!)
purpose: e.g. introduction, conclusion, body paragraphs, descriptive, expository, dialogue…etc.
short/long (depends on the genre)
contains quotations/doesn’t contain quotations
sentences? – many/few, long/short/(a mixture), etc.
Go to the next page (below) to learn more about the difference between paragraphs in fiction and non-fiction AND to look at a sample paragraph.
3. What is the difference between paragraphs in fiction vs. non-fiction (essay)?
Many different sizes
Same size (except for introduction and conclusion)
Purpose: describe setting, describe character, dialogue, action
Purpose: information about a topic, factual evidence (examples/quotations), analysis/interpretation
Structure (when do we switch to a new paragraph?): small scene change, character-to-character dialogue, time moving on (actions, new things happening)…usually chronological
Structure: one paragraph = one main topic/subtopic, one example (quotation) and one interpretation. Use the PEA (Point, Example, Analysis) structure.
Writing Essay Paragraphs
Point – introductory sentence, topic statement, what you think about the topic, setting up your example…
Illustration / Example – quotation (PAGE NUMBER). Introduce with a COLON!!!
Explanation / Analysis – explaining the quotation – explaining the writer’s techniques/choices – prove your point
Throughout the novel, Michael is portrayed as a lonely and depressed young man. His isolation is so obvious that it is recognized by his teacher, Mrs. Dando, who tries, although in vain, to cheer him up: “She took a fruit gum out of her pocket and held it out to me. A fruit gum. It was what she gave the new kids when they were sad or something” (12). In this quotation, David Almond introduces the minor character of Mrs. Dando to demonstrate the visibility of Michael’s loneliness and unhappiness. The fact that she gives Michael a fruit gum shows us that she is a kind person who is worried about him. On the other hand, because this novel is narrated in first-person, through Michael’s character, we can clearly see that he finds this gesture shallow and meaningless. His repetition of “a fruit gum” seems to imply a mocking tone and his recognition that she gives fruit gums to “new kids” who are “sad or something” shows that he does not appreciate what she is doing, because it does not help him deal with his problems. What Michael is actually seeking is a close friend that he can talk to about the serious problems involving his sister and family.
Reading journals contain short responses to stories you are reading at the moment. They are a great way to develop a variety of reading skills.
• To help you capture your developing responses as a reader
• To help you understand what you are reading
• To show how you are improving as a reader
What you could write about (pick one or two per entry):
• Speculations about how the story might develop (what will happen next?)
• Accounts of things that have happened to you that you are reminded of by events in the book
• Reflections on things in the book that really strike you
• Reactions to characters and what they do
• Comments on how the author is telling the story
• Connections to other books, films, plays or poems that you have read
• Questions you think of as you are reading
• Inferences about the underlying messages of the text
• Identification of the author’s purpose, important details, main ideas and themes
• Evaluations and opinions about the text
When you could write a response:
• At the beginning of a book
• As you are reading
• After an interesting part of a story
• At the end of a book (definitely!)
Normally the Internet a big time-sink for me. Occasionally, I stumble across gems like this… for all you budding story writers out there!