This amazing week we are finishing our narrative writing on Mr. McCreath’s daughter Josie , It’s really fun because he gave us a picture to write about and we wrote what came in our minds. The reason it’s really fun because it’s nice to see from other people’s perspective. There are all sorts of stories there’s one about a cracked ice village, one about Josie being a robber. The stories are crazy, but also interesting because each one is different. We started this writing about a long time ago but we’ve made our stories better and more interesting by revising. We are starting to make our good copies and typing it on the computer. I’m looking forward to reading them and writing another one.